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Ruth Doan MacDougall

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Introduction to The Diary Man

Article Written May 25 2005

The Diary Man is a short story written by
Ruth's father, author Daniel Doan

Since my father’s death in 1993, I’ve been going through his papers, organizing them for his collection at the Dartmouth Library into which he’d begun putting his work during the last years of his life. In the latest batch I was sorting out, I discovered an unpublished short story he’d written in 1971, “The Diary Man.” I liked it very much and I thought you might too.

Dan, my father, kept a journal all his life. In my early childhood, I imitated this sporadically with “Dear Diary” entries and, on exciting trips to the seacoast in New Hampshire and Maine, little travel journals. As I neared junior-high age, I got more serious about it, inspired not only by Dan but also by a young-adult novel, THE FAIR ADVENTURE by Elizabeth Janet Gray. In this book the young heroine kept a journal in a big leather loose-leaf notebook, writing down mainly thoughts, ideas, and quotations, instead of a diary account. The book’s title itself is a quote from Shakespeare that I loved the moment I read it:

“The day shall not be up so soon as I,
To try the fair adventure of tomorrow.”

So I began my version of this, using a regular Woolworth’s loose-leaf notebook, writing more lengthily, and hunting for a quotation that would sum up the entry’s events, lessons, or my attitude. I used the quote as a sort of epigraph for the entry. My parents’ collections of Dorothy Parker’s poems and Ogden Nash’s got a real workout in my searches for quotes, but I also did a lot of poring over the Untermeyer anthologies of modern British and American poets as well as everything else in my folks’ bookcases and in my own GIRL’S BOOK OF VERSE and such.

After I read Dan’s “Diary Man,” I ordered a secondhand copy of THE FAIR ADVENTURE but when it arrived I wasn’t sure if I should reread it or let it be a happy memory. Whichever I did, I knew I’d be forever grateful to Elizabeth Janet Gray (Elizabeth Gray Vining) for such good training. Then I took a peep at the first page—and I was hooked, on the story, on the memory of my young self absorbed in the story, all those emotions we encounter when we reread a book from our past. But how odd that the only thing I had remembered over the years was the journal and the quotations!
an old commercial 5-year diaryAnyway, being nothing if not obsessive, in my freshman year I began keeping a diary as well as a journal, writing daily in the one-page diary, on weekends choosing a quote and writing in the loose-leaf journal. But as schoolwork increased, I finally recognized that I did not have time for both forms and that I was spending what spare time I had on these entries when I’d prefer to be writing stories. So the journal tapered off and I only continued with the diaries. And when I was about to go off to college, I didn’t know what to do with my cumbersome accumulation of loose-leaf notebooks containing embarrassing youthful introspection, so I did what everybody hates to hear that a writer did: Like an idiot, I burned the journals in the backyard incinerator. The diaries were more portable, and at least I had the sense to keep them. Needless to say, they came in very handy when I was writing THE CHEERLEADER!

My sister, Penny, once went to a talk given by Elisabeth Ogilvie, author of the Bennett Island series and other novels. Asked if she kept a journal, Elisabeth replied that she didn’t because she felt it would “skim the cream off.” When Penny told me this, I realized that this was what I’d sensed when I stopped my journal-writing. Some writers like my father can do both, but I had to save my writing for fiction.

When I started college, I was determined to be free of both journals and diaries. Nothing but my assignment book! That lasted the first semester. Then in January 1958 I couldn’t stand it any longer and began doing what my mother and my grandmother had always done, keeping a record on the four daily lines in a five-year diary. I’ve done this ever since. It fulfills the need for a record. But five-year diaries have been getting harder and harder to find, and last year I had to search on the internet to locate my latest before I discovered that the Vermont Country Store catalogue has triumphantly brought them back. Why did they become rare?

I gather that there is new interest in journal-keeping; indeed, “journal” seems to have become a verb! And of course there’s the even newer version, blogging.

The need to keep a record. In GREEN THOUGHTS: A WRITER IN THE GARDEN, Eleanor Perenyi muses, “(I) wonder if the garden would exist without the journal, such as a life may appear half-lived without a diary to record it.”

Here, split between the two panels below, this one,  is my father’s short story on the subject.

 

The Diary Man

A Short Story by Daniel Doan

 Edward Bristol used a jackknife to make the first records that began his years of diary-keeping. I learned this in the summer of 1924. The discovery came about because Punk Carter shot Eddie in the calf of the leg with a .22 bullet fired by a crowbar. Eddie was ten. I was eleven. Punk was a gangly older boy, thirteen, maybe even fourteen. He had slick black hair and shifty eyes, and he possessed both a sly secrecy and an ability to execute wild schemes. On a rainy summer day we were fooling around in the cellar of the barn next to the shop where Eddie’s father built window frames and doors and did all sorts of carpenter work. Mr. Bristol also kept a cow and a horse and raised a garden. The smell of cow manure and horse manure permeated the cellar of the barn, the heavy timbers and planks above, and the dirt floor. The arched doorways opened level with the barnyard, because of the sloping ground on which the barn had been built. On a rainy summer day we were fooling around in the cellar of the barn next to the shop where Eddie’s father built window frames and doors and did all sorts of carpenter work. Mr. Bristol also kept a cow and a horse and raised a garden. The smell of cow manure and horse manure permeated the cellar of the barn, the heavy timbers and planks above, and the dirt floor. The arched doorways opened level with the barnyard, because of the sloping ground on which the barn had been built. Punk and Eddie and I avoided the cobwebs and big spiders near the windows. We were snooping into boxes of nails and kegs of old hardware stored between piles of lumber and sleds. I could hear the hens clucking in their pen over in the south corner of the barn cellar. Punk discovered several .22 cartridges loose in a wooden box of carriage bolts. They belonged to Eddie as representative of the Bristol family rights and property, but Punk kept them in his hand. He puffed his cheeks and averted his eyes. None of us had a rifle or revolver. There was, however, a block of iron handy. There was a steel crowbar with the usual round handle, squared lower section, and wedge point for moving rocks. Eddie said, "No, somebody’ll get hurt. Anyhow, they belong to Pa." He held out his hand for the cartridges. Punk leaned over and carefully spat in Eddie’s hand. Eddie kicked him in the shin. Punk put him down and rubbed his face with dirt and let him up. I wanted to help Eddie, but I was scared of Punk. Eddie walked away and went into the hen pen through the wire door. I didn’t think why, except he was mad. I knew his chores included feeding and watering the White Plymouth Rocks. Each day he collected the eggs for Mrs. Bristol. His older brother, Rory, milked the cow and fed the horse and worked with Mr. Bristol who was a tall silent man in clean blue overalls. I moved away from Punk, too. I began looking through a keg of bent nails and rusty hinges behind a pile of lumber. Sometimes if nobody paid any attention to Punk, he’d go away. There was a long quiet. Then Punk’s hoarse voice, "All right, you guys, let’s fire just one!" I stood up and could see him poised with the crowbar over the block of iron. One of the little .22 cartridges lay on the block. I began to giggle, which was an inane way to express the paralyzing certainty that disaster must surely strike. But why should I worry, hearing Punk call out, "She’s headed right for the back wall!” Punk raised and slowly lowered the bar, aiming. The back wall was dirt and stones. I heard cackling in the hen pen as I dropped behind the lumber, then the bang-whine of the cartridge and bullet. Beyond the chicken wire a squawk and a scream blended together. I saw Punk whirl through the open door and run across the barnyard. He leaped the fence and took off across the pasture toward the woods. I almost followed him, but somehow I had sense enough to go to the hen pen door and peer through the wire mesh. Eddie leaned against the wall. He grasped one leg in his hand below the knee. He was holding an open jackknife in the other hand. On the dirt floor in front of him, focus of his eyes, a white and red-stained chicken flapped wildly and sprayed blood on him from a jet in her neck. There was blood on Eddie’s green and white striped shirt, on his tan knickerbockers, and on his sneakers. To me nothing had any connection—the .22 cartridge aimed at the back wall—it must have been—Punk said so. A moment passed before my mind discarded this reliance on the statement of an older person—even Punk—and imagined the bullet slicing toward the hen pen. But I couldn’t move. I heard rushing footsteps above me on the plank floor. Eddie’s older brother charged down the stairs. My panic and paralysis eased at once. Rory could affect you that way: very competent, big for his age, crewcut hair, jaw. He saw that the wire door was hooked on the inside, and unhesitating kicked it open. He stepped over the dying hen. He bent to look at Eddie’s leg, pushed aside Eddie’s hand. Eddie’s small angular face showed white as the unharmed chickens that pressed around the little door open to the outside yard. Rory said, "It’s nothing but a scratch. Where’s all the blood from? What happened?" In my relief, I felt an irresistible need to confess and to bear witness. I blurted out words—about the .22s, the way Punk had fired one, the hen shot in the neck before the bullet hit Eddie—that must be where the blood came from—Eddie wasn’t hurt bad, was he? "No," said Rory. "Give me your handkerchief, Eddie. What you doing with that knife?" Eddie wouldn’t answer. He closed the knife and slid it into his pocket. He took out his handkerchief. Eddie was always very neat. His handkerchief looked extra clean because of his bloody shirt. Rory tied it around Eddie’s leg. Rory said, "All right, now what about the knife?" Eddie stood on both legs, small, white-faced, a lock of brown hair over his forehead, eyes big but cautious and observant. "None of your business," Eddie said. "Oh, yes it is. Pa’s gone for the day, and I’m in charge. You know that. I’m looking after things outside the house." Eddie limped into a corner, where he pointed at two wide boards on the wall. The boards had marks on them, carving, good carving, considering Eddie’s age. There were numbers and letters, dates and words, beginning with: DEC. 25, 1923 KNIFE I read: APRIL 14 ROBIN I read: JUNE 19 CAUT 2 TROUT The lopsided circles of the 9 and of the O had ragged edges. Circles were hard to carve. I read: JULY 4 GREAT FIREWORKS Then came the entry Eddie had made that day, the ninth of August. I read: AUG 9 PUNK IS A SHIT Rory said, "Well, you’ve explained the knife, and I agree that’s what he is, but you shouldn’t have wrote it out." I blinked at seeing the word right there on the wall. I also noticed that Eddie had solved the problem of carving circles; the round part of the nine he’d squared to suit the fibers of the wood. That evening, penalties were meted out for the shooting. Punk’s old man used a length of harness strap on him. Eddie and I were jointly and separately forbidden to see Punk all the rest of the summer. Eddie received a tanning with a shingle on his behind from Mr. Bristol, and he had to shave the word from the wall with a carpenter’s plane. My father shut off my allowance for two weeks because of my general participation, and for sins of omission if not commission. The Bristols roasted and ate the hen. Eddie carved no more letters and numbers on the hen pen wall. He began keeping a homemade diary. I saw him writing once as I came to our shack in the woods. He whisked inside the lean-to of poles and old boards. He came out empty-handed. We smoked cigarettes made of pine needles wrapped in brown paper. We went back to Eddie’s house for cookies and root beer, both made by his mother. I suppose we smelled of smoke, and she reported to Mr. Bristol, who ordered the shack demolished. He sent Rory along to insure the destruction. Eddie tried to slip on ahead through the pines, but Rory kept up with him and caught him taking the diary from under a board. It was made of lined paper folded to pocket size and stitched with harness thread for binding. It contained only a series of dates, a few notes about the weather, and three sentences reporting a walk with a visiting older cousin who had told him about rocks. Eddie’s strange and powerful urge to record his activities was again frustrated by his youth and by his lack of privacy. Besides, the direction of his drive turned inward when Rory began calling him "Diary Duke." After a while, Rory stopped, maybe because his mother had taken him to task in her soft yet effective way, and Rory was goodhearted and would see the wrong in teasing Eddie about something that was so important to Eddie. But temporarily the name stuck, because Eddie kept himself outside the rest of us in a withdrawn way that we took to be an offensive air of superiority, deserving the nickname. A year or two later I discovered the secret outlet for Eddie’s drive during that time. I was hunting crows over beyond the woods where our shack had been. I carried proudly—cradled in the crook of my elbow like Daniel Boone—a .22 rifle that my father then allowed. I happened across a beech tree with carving on it. A beech tree is best for carving. The smooth gray bark cuts easily in any direction. Letters on a beech will last for years and years. I found the initials E.B. in careful small letters. They were on the first tree, no different from initials that any of us kids might have left behind us. But a little farther along among some hemlocks, I found another beech with dates beginning in the fall after the shooting and after Rory started the name "Diary Duke." The fall of 1924. My first thought was that Eddie had ventured a long way from home that year. I myself had never explored these woods before, and Eddie had done it when he was only ten going on eleven. I read: OCT. 14, 1924 PETE That was Eddie’s rabbit. Though a large and clumsy Belgian Hare, Pete had managed to squeeze out of the hutch, and had met death in the jaws of a neighbor’s dog. I read: MAY 2, 1924 SAW 1 DOE I was impressed. Deer were uncommon near our village, and I had never seen one. Eddie’s accomplishment stuck in my mind, but I hesitated to ask him about his secret carving. Another year or two passed. I must have been fifteen. I met Eddie that winter out in the woods near the edge of an open pasture. I came slogging across on snowshoes, new ones given me for my birthday, and I carried my .22 rifle to use if I saw a rabbit on that cold sunlit day. My breath blew out misty in the crisp air. New snow lay pure and fluffy across the pasture. Eddie wore a red and black plaid mackinaw, same as I did. It was standard winter-wear then in Houghton, New Hampshire. He had on a black wool visored cap with ear flaps tied up over the crown. Men wore them mostly, and it made him look older. He stood there. He stood there gazing beyond me. Finally he said, "That’s something, to see your tracks behind you." I looked around. The matching ovals, soft and undefined in the new snow, went away straight, growing smaller, and curved to the skyline. I said, "There’s nothing like snowshoes to get you over the snow." He looked at me from purposeful brown eyes, an expression on his composed face that verged on a frown, as though I had missed his meaning entirely and had opened another subject remote from his thought. He said, "They show you’ve been there." "So would boot tracks." "That’s anyone," he said. "Your tracks say a man on snowshoes went by—a special kind of man." I looked back again, and to me the tracks seemed empty in a way that caught at my heart; the maker had gone. Eddie was saying, "Anyhow, it’s a sort of record. And you get over the snow good. I’m going to make me a pair." With the help of Mr. Bristol, he did, and the harnesses, too. Eddie and I became friendly again, but in an older way. We would go snowshoeing together and take sandwiches, on Saturday, and build a fire in the woods, and toast the sandwiches on forked sticks. Hot peanut butter sandwiches! Cheese was better; it melted until it was soft and chewy between the crunchy slices of bread. We learned to clear the snow to the ground with snowshoes as shovels, so the fire would have room to burn without melting snow and putting itself out after the first flareup. The trips were occasional. I was practicing basketball with some other kids in the empty stable in the lot behind my father’s law office. Eddie never cared for sports. But Eddie and I had fun that winter. I told him about finding his beech trees, and he didn’t mind. He said he remembered seeing that doe. "Big event,” he said. "I’ve seen a lot since then." "Golly, I’d like to see a deer." "They’re all yarded up now out in the spruce swamps. Next summer I can show you one." Months went by. I had forgotten the deer, but Eddie remembered. He came by my house one afternoon in the summer. We walked over the hill through the woods and crossed the dirt road past the swimming hole in Carr Brook. He took me to a ledge overlooking some old farmland. We saw four deer come out of the woods and start feeding on the wild cherry bushes along the stone wall. They were the first deer I had ever seen. I watched them closely. I noticed Eddie’s actions, too. He pulled a small notebook from the pocket of his dungarees. (We had graduated from the knickerbocker age.) He slipped a pencil from the binding, took out the same old jackknife from another pocket, and sharpened the pencil. "I use hard lead for my notes," he announced, as though it were the most natural thing for a kid to be doing. "The writing won’t smudge. If it gets wet, it’s still legible." "Well, it’s sure better than carving on beech trees." "Yes, I think so." He turned back a page. "I keep a record of a lot of things. Here are measurements I made of the glacier marks on this ledge. I was here yesterday. And the compass bearing, to show which direction the glacier moved. I’m interested in things like that, but probably you aren’t." "I might be. Tell me more." He knew I had been playing baseball that summer and hanging around the lake looking at girls in bathing suits, and learning to drive a car. All very frivolous to Eddie, I thought, for he had been working with his father, although he spent a lot of time in the woods. "Well," said Eddie, turning the pages of his notebook, then glancing up at me and back to the notebook. "Well, I walked four and a half miles yesterday." "How do you know?" "My pedometer. I saved up and sent away for it to Sears."

He took it from his watch pocket, the same as he might have taken out an Ingersol watch, attached to his belt by a leather thong. I saw another leather thong going into his side pocket, where he must now carry his Ingersol. He looked at me with his round brown eyes, expressionless. I had the feeling he was testing me, waiting to see if I would scoff, for who cares how far he walks just rambling around the woods?

I thought all of a sudden how serious and older he looked. I could hardly believe he was a year younger than I. He looked very reserved. The boyish narrowness of his face had shaped into cheekbones and jawbones that gave it length and definition, and somehow accentuated the eyes and forehead. He was no longer the thin little kid with airs of superiority. He was, I sensed, some special individual, self-sufficient. His tanned arms and hands showed strength and muscle. He no longer—I realized—had the habit of brushing back a lock of hair. He must have trained it to stay in place.

Still holding the pedometer, he kept his eyes on me.

"It’s great," I said, and for a moment I wished I had one. He made it seem that important.

The story continues here. . . 

 

The Diary Man, continued

He put the pedometer back in his watch pocket. He studied the notebook again. "There’s a practical reason as well as the record of the distance I walk. I’m studying glacial phenomena around here, and I can measure the distance between, say, this striated ledge and another over on that ridge. Or I can go back a certain distance and be where I found something."

"How do you mean?"

"I could go back to the place I was on Tuesday, the eighth." He turned a page of the notebook. He looked me straight in the eyes again, testing. "I found a granite outcropping with quartz crystals."

"Honest? I’ve seen veins of quartz but never crystals."

"I chiseled them out and took them home. I’ll show you when we get back, if you like."

This offer made me inordinately happy and excited. I said, "You bet I’d like to see them."

From reading and from tales of prospectors, I associated quartz and gold. A few years before, a woodsman named Mose Williams had blown himself up dynamiting for gold out on Quartz Mountain. Maybe he had been sober instead of drunk as everyone said. Maybe he had known something nobody else could find.

When we reached Eddie’s house on the edge of the village, he took me past the barn and across the yard to the long shed that was his father’s carpentry shop. We were alone in the bench-lined room with its smell of pine shavings and varnish. Eddie opened a padlocked chest on one of the benches. I looked in and saw box after box of rock samples neatly tagged. I saw a large notebook, a handbook of rocks and minerals in red binding, a mason’s hammer, chisel, and drill.

Eddie took out a little cardboard box and showed me a cluster of white quartz crystals. They gleamed dull yet exciting, mysteriously six-sided.

The notion of treasure in the earth brought Eddie and me together more than the snowshoes had done. It lasted two years. We were cocky enough to doubt our parents and other adults who said that the town had been explored for minerals back to Revolutionary times, and there was only a scattering, and some old pit mines for mica. We hiked and camped around the hills and small mountains east of the river. After I was sixteen and had my driver’s license, I could borrow the old Dodge that my father kept for fishing and hunting.

We traveled through the White Mountains, mostly in the foothills, to old mines and diggings. Eddie always carried his pocket notebook. We camped out a lot. We slept on balsam boughs under a piece of canvas stretched between trees. Windy rain sometimes soaked our blankets. We protected ourselves from insects by applying a stinky fly dope with a pine tar base. I often caught trout. In the evenings I would cook them with bacon in an old frying pan, and boil potatoes in an empty lard pail. Eddie would transfer by firelight or candlelight the information from his pocket notebook into a daybook and diary. He had a trick of punching a hole in the side of a tin can with his jackknife and inserting a candle and lighting it. The shiny inside of the can threw a spot of light on his daybook. We had a flashlight, but he wanted to save the batteries.

We got along well. I accepted him, while tentatively understanding that his driving interest I would have no urge to match, that his single-minded pursuit of an idea would be far beyond my estimate of its importance. I thought I gave in to him a lot. He was, in matters he considered serious, a loner. He did what he wanted, in a pleasant way, but stubborn. If I had learned of an old mine, and he had heard of one, we went to his first or he went alone.

Before long our interests diverged. I would dig over mine dumps looking for minerals, or I’d creep about ledges in search of crystals. Then I’d go fishing in the nearest pond. Or if we were on a stream, I would catch some trout and then try panning for gold. I never found any. Eddie was more interested in the formations of the earth’s crust, in the combinations and origins of stones and outcroppings. He would study glacial deposits in gravel banks. He would travel miles through the woods alone on foot seeking the limits of strange rock formations.

Of course, his lack of knowledge hindered him, and this began to haunt him, as though he might never rid himself of this failing or weakness. He read all the books he could find. He longed to go to college. Our separation began the summer I had graduated from high school, and Eddie still had another year.

He found a regular job. I don’t know how, in that Depression year of 1932. He worked at a hotel golf course near Mount Washington. He slept in a board cabin with three other boys. He mowed the golf course by tractor and the greens by hand mower. He saved most of his wages for college. I drove up to see him once, and found him at the garage near the golf course, tarring the slanted flat roof with a long-handled brush and a pail of black asphalt. He said he went rock hunting on his day off. He asked me to come up and go with him. I had discovered that rock hunting couldn’t compare with girls. I made some wise remark—"wise” was what we called it then, meaning impudent—to the effect that my presence would interfere with his taking along one of the waitresses. He looked unblinking at me. Exposure to the sun had tanned his face dark brown, and he was sweating up there on the roof. He said, "I won’t get caught by that trap.” A ribald reply from me also failed to amuse him.

A few years later, I had second thoughts about our respective attitudes toward girls. I was living in Boston with a wife and a baby son, and finding my days in an uncle’s bank hardly all I had dreamed about, such as becoming a world traveler and foreign correspondent. Eddie was working for his master’s degree in geology at a university out West.

In the honored tradition of those years in our state, I had gone to Dartmouth with the rich boys, and Eddie had gone to the University of New Hampshire with the poor boys. He applied himself. I didn’t. He was reaching for that knowledge the lack of which had haunted him. I eased into an English major, saying that liberal arts must not be expected to prepare you to earn a living. I learned later that it certainly enriches your life, although I doubt whether that has anything to do with Eddie. Still, maybe it has. I’ve come to doubt my doubts.

Let’s say I followed the route of least resistance. I went to work for my uncle because I had no money of my own and wanted to marry Sarah, which I did. She wanted a baby, and I didn’t mind. When the war came, the thing to do seemed to be to enlist in the navy. After the war my job in the bank was waiting for me.

Eddie took the hard way of driving himself: hard work at his studies, hard work to earn his way, hard work in the field after he became a member of expeditions into the Canadian bush. During the war he specialized in oil explorations connected with our national emergency. I think he devised some new techniques. Then he was in Alaska, South America, the Middle East. He seemed to be all over the map. He sent me cards regularly, and sometimes short concise letters, although I could scarcely recall when we had last talked together.

Years passed, and I never saw him, but I carried thoughts of him as part of my life equipment, the way you do about a long-time friend. I came to envy him his travels, his success, his varied interests all over the world. I would commute into Boston from our home in the suburb of Winchester, and I would think of him free from the deadly rat race in which I found myself.

I envied him, later, when he bought a house in our hometown and remodeled it and moved in with his young blond wife, his son, and his daughter. The children seemed impossibly young to me. He had been almost forty when he married. Billy was blond, chubby and pink-cheeked, sensitive and easily moved to tears, but usually deliberate and calm like his mother, for Myra’s beauty was largely emphasized by her composed personality. Myra was the sort of woman who can arrange flowers with a touch. As for the daughter, Rachel was brown-haired and cool-eyed, like Eddie, and she expressed his intensity of concentration when she sewed dresses for her dolls.

I discovered all this when I went to Houghton to visit my folks. Eddie and I had a good reunion one evening, and I drank too much. I had walked to his house along the familiar streets, under the old trees. He drove me home in his quietly expensive foreign car.

I continued to see very little of him.

We did go rock hunting one summer, for old time’s sake, not in an ancient Dodge but in his Land Rover. The excitement eluded me. Instead I felt quietly happy, with only a slight pang at realizing only the aura lingered from our youthful adventures. Besides, I had forgotten most of the geological terms. Eddie had learned hundreds more.

We camped by an abandoned mica mine in a green hardwood forest near a pond. I went fishing for trout. Eddie set off rock hunting, or prospecting—whatever it should be called when done by a rich, successful geologist and oil man—mine owner, for all I knew.

He came back with beryl crystals from up on the mountain. That evening at the campfire, he made notes about his find, just as he used to. The beryl crystals could be of no importance to him anymore; to record his doings was still his obsession, or now had become a powerful habit. Somehow I felt I was part of this long continuity of his. I sat against a tree smoking my pipe, sometimes slapping at a mosquito. I was full of trout and rum and contentment. I found pleasure in Eddie’s company and in our shared past. I was at other campfires in other days."You know," said Eddie, "I’m thinking of hiring a secretary. Have her type up all these diaries and workbooks. Publish them at my own expense. I’ve used everything of scientific value in them, but as I get older, they seem to mean more personally."

"You always did like to make a record of your doings. Remember the hen pen?"

"I’ll never forget it." He gave the snort and cough that had come to represent his laugh. "I went down there one day, a few years back when I was visiting the folks. Saw the dates and everything, still there, kind of dark and dusty, but I could read them—except about Punk.” He laughed again. "Gave me a lot of satisfaction," he admitted.

"Sure, I bet it did." My words lacked the enthusiasm I intended, for his return to the hen pen seemed to me silly and sentimental. Yet because I had a sense of the years past, and of the boy with the jackknife making his first unconscious refusal of oblivion, I added, "It must have been a good experience."

""It was," he said, "but it got to me a little, thinking of how long ago it had been, yet I could still read those carvings. And after a minute it seemed like yesterday." He put more wood on the fire. "Another thing I did, recently that is—well, you know Billy’s growing up. I wanted to show him where I’d been as a kid. I thought I’d show him the beech trees I carved. I should have known better. The woods had been cut over, logged. No beech trees with my carving on them. So I took Billy over that hill where the old Norris farm used to be—the place where you and I fooled around one afternoon tying loops in the young pines that had seeded into the pasture." "I remember.”

"Well, it seemed quite a walk for Billy, though only two and one half miles by my pedometer. I don’t think I had taken him in the woods more than three times, not really hiking, and he kept making comments about the bushes and the bugs. He tripped over logs and stones. Anyway, I found the pines, part of a forest, for gosh sakes, big around as my leg now. Bigger. I had Billy climb one, and I took his picture sitting on the loop, He wasn’t much impressed. I wish he’d go out in the woods more. Like we used to. That was a good boyhood, the one we had, you know it?"

"Sure was," I agreed.

"Long time ago. Longer than we think, you know that?"

"More than just years."

"That’s what I mean." He paused. "Not that I pretend to understand it. Nor my kids.”

"What are you talking about? You’ve been right in the middle of new discoveries, new developments. You’ve traveled all over the world. You know all kinds of people.”

"Just the same,” Eddie said slowly, pointing at the flames in front of him, "that fire still lights my notebook for me. I have six new flashlights and two propane lanterns at home, but you know, I left them there on purpose. Know why? I wanted to try the firelight again. I’ve seen change. I’ve caused some. But I don’t know about progress. Sometimes I get out my old diaries. I read them over. I feel more of a person afterward. They tie me together into a whole man.”

"Lucky you.”

"Yes, I’m fortunate to have them. I’m glad I kept them all these years.” He leaned over and pushed together the fire, which had burned down. It was a way he had. He picked up the charred sticks by the unburned ends and placed them on the red coals so they flared again. "But it’s all very—” he hesitated, "very transient. The diaries capture it and hold it for me. Of course, for other people, I hope, after I’m gone.”

I didn’t know what to say.

This camping trip was the last for several years.

I saw some changes myself. My folks died. Surprisingly saddened, for we had grown far apart, and they were old and sick, I found myself shaken by my new role as quarry of pursuing time and extinction—nobody in back of me anymore—a loneliness incomprehensible before their deaths.

With the money I inherited, I decided to live a new life while I could. I gave up my job at the bank. I paused to look around me—felt bewildered, and moved to the old house in Houghton. Just Sarah and me. Our son was grown and married, and we were grandparents.

That summer late—it must have been August, for Sarah and I had been busy moving and fitting into village life, adjusting ourselves and finally enjoying ourselves—Eddie returned from an extended trip with Myra. He wanted to make another excursion fishing and rock hunting. I told him it would have to be something easy for me, no backpacking up mountain trails nor sleeping on the ground. So we camped at the end of a logging road close to his new Land Rover, beside a brook. We put up a comfortable big tent to shelter the air mattresses.

Eddie talked again that evening by the campfire, after he had made his notes. He had aged to gray hair. He had the sinewy arms of a tough old man. I was made doubly aware of my own bald head and arthritic joints. He talked about his son and daughter. Billy couldn’t settle down after his service in Vietnam. He worked at odd jobs, got himself fired once or twice, went away to college.

"We didn’t hear from him for a long time,” Eddie said. "But after all, we knew from Vietnam he wasn’t a frequent letter-writer. Then we kept sending him things he liked—canned nuts, salted you know, and candy and snacks like anchovies. He’d acknowledge those. Myra used to do the packaging. To make sure the weight was right, she’d put the package on the pink baby scale she weighed Billy on when he was a baby. I bought her a different scale. I couldn’t stand to see her use the other. Well, he came back from Vietnam, and now he isn’t in college at all but traveling around the West with his wife and calling home for money every so often. I don’t understand it. A wife, no job.”

Eddie went through his fire-tending routine. "And Rachel...Rachel’s living with a bearded hippie in Boston and experimenting with drugs, I’m afraid.”

Billy and Rachel were younger than my son, I was aware, but Eddie seemed to be telling me of a different generation. Perhaps he was; perhaps they were. Kids have changed that much in a few years. He said finally that he had hoped for grandchildren. Billy was to have a vasectomy after his wife’s abortion. Rachel was going to have a tubal ligation. No grandchildren for Eddie.

I turned the talk to his diaries. He had put off hiring a secretary and having them typed and published, but he had been looking them over the other night after his return. Did I remember...

We talked for a long time there beside the fire. Something was different. After the second day, we drove back down the mountain.

Eddie always was a neat man, as he had been a neat boy, in his person, in his habits, and as much as possible in his surroundings. The mahogany desk in his study could have been from a room preserved after the death of a famous man. There were filing cabinets, cases of minerals, shelf upon shelf of books, and the diaries year by year—all catalogued.

His house outside was always painted fresh white, the lawn trimmed, the garden in rows. During the wnter, even the snow paths were cut through the drifts straight and sheer, as he had trained the neighbor’s boy to make them with the snowblower. Eddie liked to do much of this work himself.The next spring he was tidying up the grounds by burning weed patches and old grass. Safe enough; the earth still held dampness from melting snow. Hardly a breath of air stirred the blue sky or cooled the warm sunlight. I remember because I went out to dig in our garden. I had taken off my jacket, but I put it on again when the wind came up chill, in the way that Robert Frost noted about springtime in New Hampshire. I remember because I waved to Eddie and Myra as they drove past, going for a ride on that lovely day.

Some time after, I heard the fire siren wailing its summons to our volunteer fire department.When I reached Eddie’s house flames had erupted through the roof, which seemed about to collapse or be wafted away on the tremendous updraft of fire. Our giant chief, Ben Bowman, lunged out the front door with his arms around Eddie, whose feet dangled limply. Ben walked toward the road and gently placed Eddie on the grass beside a fire truck.

I went to him. He lay gasping, stared at me as I bent over him, burst out, "They’re gone!” Then shaking his head, "Where am I?” Sitting up, choking, coughing, sooty face, singed eyebrows. "Who am I?”

But he recovered quickly enough and directed the men in saving the barn with hoses from the pond at the dam in the brook. The house smouldered to a charred shell sagging around the brick chimneys. The sun was going down.

After a while, about dusk, when there was nothing to be done, I prevailed on Eddie and Myra to come to our house. He had been talking of rooms at the inn until he could rebuild. Then he seemed to have no more to say. He nodded, and with Myra, got into his car and followed me home.

He continued distant and silent at our house. I saw no need to attempt to draw him from himself. He had taken a shower and dressed in a shirt and slacks of mine, and slippers. We were seated in the living room. Sarah had gone upstairs with Myra, whose reaction had been exhaustion. I noticed Eddie looking around him, an inquiring look on his face as though he had not seen the room lately. The room had remained essentially the same as when my folks lived there. He must remember it.

Finally he said, motioning about him, "These are mostly your folks’ things, aren’t they?”

"Yes. The couch is new.”

"I like this room,” he said. "You know, I wish I’d kept my folks’ house when they moved to Florida. Don’t have anything of theirs, not like this. They passed away before yours did, and I was young enough not to care about the old place—except those boards in the hen pen. I pried them loose and stored them in my attic. Believe it or not. I must be some kind of nut.” He looked at me quietly a moment. "You like living here, don’t you?”

"Sure do.” I was tired. I had a whiskey. Eddie declined, as he usually did.

Sarah came back from seeing to Myra. "Sound asleep. How about soup and sandwiches for supper?”

We ate a little, and soon after, we went to bed. I offered Eddie a sleeping pill, but he shook his head. I took one myself.

In the morning I rose early as was my custom, and went to the eastern window. There had been a frost, perhaps the last of the spring, and I could see it white on the porch roof where the sun had not yet reached it, and on the shadowed section of the asphalt driveway, where Eddie walked along toward the garage. He moved slowly. His feet dragged. His hands hung at his sides.

He went into the garage, walking below the overhead doors that my father had installed when he remodeled the building from the stable it had been in the old days. I kept a sort of workshop and toolroom in the section where I first remembered stalls as a boy—although my father never kept horses; he drove then a slant-front Franklin, later the Dodge, which he kept for fishing, then a Packard.

Eddie came out of the garage. I saw a hammer in one hand—a heavy mason’s hammer, and a stone-cutting chisel he must have found among my rock hunting equipment, which I hadn’t touched since our last camping trip.

He walked toward the flower garden. There were shrubs, and paths, and a sundial, and a birdbath, two rustic seats by the evergreen hedge, and a big round boulder. Sarah and I had raked away the winter mulch of leaves from the flower beds, but I had not yet hauled them to the compost heap, and they lay in brown rows on the grass. I thought we had uncovered the perennials too early, and I hoped the frost had not hurt the tender green shoots.

I noticed a change in Eddie’s actions and, probably, in his mood. I saw the precise walk, the determined carriage, the trim posture. Arms swinging, he stepped out toward the big boulder.

He began to chisel at the boulder. He knelt down and drove the hammer against the head of the chisel. I could hear through the open window the ting-spat, ting-spat, combining the steel-on-steel and the steel-on-rock.

The odd thing was I felt no concern. I knew what he was doing—making a record. I could imagine the date, and I supposed he would square the nine as he had learned with the jackknife. I wondered what he would put after the date. I ent into the bathroom to shave. I dressed. I went out to the garden.

Eddie was kneeling there in the sun on the grass in front of the boulder. He looked very gray. The hammer and chisel lay beside him. I read, as I had thought, the figures and letters for that month and year.

He turned slowly toward me, flexing his hands together as though his fingers ached. We both looked at the boulder.

He said, "Hope you don’t mind.”

"Not at all. What are you going to chisel in after the date?”

He looked at me from those brown eyes, cautious, observant.

"Nothing,” he said.


 

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